Best flash ever.
It's nice, but..
You need to think about the users that have dial-up, like me. I had to turn it off and on to get it to work.
People still have dial-up? lol.
'Gotta agree with Gate-keeper-girl.
You're good with faces and much better than me in backgrounds, but your body movements (Practice, Practice, Practice!), transfers (Movement of that prescription slip), shadows (just tint and lighten) and clouds (make them like the back of a couch and C&P) need work.
Better. Still needs work, but I can understand.
You killed the writer that fucked up the last part, good. But you need to work on the background, but at 20.4 MB, it really isn't a current problem.
Cursing like a sailor is not comedy.
The animation needs a MAJOR overhaul, and frankly, you cannot draw with a mouse. Do not worry, barely anyone can.
Pointless and Stupid.
Animation- Total shit, you need more practice.
Story- It doesn't make any sense.
Sound- Alright, but the screaming was a pain in the ass.
Overall- Has a MAJOR amount of improvement until presentable.
Anime is stupid and the people who zeroed it are weeaboo fucks. Don't listen to them, because you are right.
There is nothing to criticize, It was that good.
There's just one thing you need to work on: Francine, be louder, it sounded like you were just whispering into the microphone. Other than that, Beautiful job.
So full of win.
You animated really well, the plot was funny and your timing was perfect.
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